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A lot of the first paragraphs are in present tense when they should be in past tense like the majority of the story. Here’s one:
“Xu Man is someone who cherishing his life, so it goes without saying that he will try his best to keep himself alive. Hence as soon as he returned to the Demonic Sect, he starting to pursue Tang Sifeng vigorously.”
cherishing -> cherished
goes -> went
will -> would
starting -> started
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Fixed the one that you told me. Thank you for that. English aren’t my first language so I am not an expert in tense, so thank you for your help
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🙏🙏🙏Thank you very much for this HE story❣️❣️❣️
❤️🥰I think Tang Sifeng loved Xu Man from before the Gu infected Xu Man.🥰❤️😍
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Tang Sifeng is too cold though, good thing Xu Man are infected otherwise they will never be together XD
Glad you like the story 😀
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Thank you for the short story. Lol cute.
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Hi, I loved this mini story, I would like to request your permission to use your translation and make a Spanish version.
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Sure, go ahead. Don’t forget to give me the link after you are done so I can put it into the post
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aaahhhh this is too cute, i want more!!!! (╯✧▽✧)╯ thank u for translating this~
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Glad you like it 😀
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Here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/262733800-%C2%A1por-favor-dime-que-me-amas
Again, thank you ~~
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Link added 😀
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hello sorry for bothering you
Thank for your translation.
I want to ask for your permission to retranslation this short novel to my language, Burmes in wattpad.
I love this story.I’ll give a credit to you
Thank you❤
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Sure. Just leave a link here 😀
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Here :
https://www.wattpad.com/story/271821582?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Tweety-94&wp_originator=FPRROL7QF%2BOo73jLLHo%2FuCOTNCIHXvC3kUhmd29%2BWiSRAeFmP96%2BHadRr4qMtYTb4GJUKMjtpNOT4CNMLlvXklrZpaQ%2BtlX%2BzskcleX1urTdO%2BgmSnd%2BEcI%2Fb1YGsdUb
ThankYou❤
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Link added 😀
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ML obviously already fall for MC in the past 3 months MC courting him. But I wonder if MC actually starting to fall for ML in the last 3 months or if the feelings already exist before?
I’m glad ML actually put another Gu so MC would say I Love You back without problem. And MC have no problem with it.
This is truly Cute Adorkable Novel!
Thank You So Much for Translated this Adorkable Wonderful Novel!!! 🙇🙇🙇🙇🙇
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No, leader did not put another Gu, it is just a trick so he can get Xu Man to said ‘I love you’ back
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